A staff member of a hotel has helped you in a difficult situation. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.What was the problem?What has happened?What should be done by the manager?

Essay topics:

A staff member of a hotel has helped you in a difficult situation. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

What was the problem?

What has happened?

What should be done by the manager?

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in connection with some issue which I have faced during my current stay in your hotel.

I arrived at the hotel two week ago. Unfortunately, the air company had lost my backpack with my credit cards, wallet and a laptop and, moreover, they had not been able to solve the problem on the spot. I could not even imagine what I should do with my problem, because I was left without any money in a big city. This situation influenced negatively on my phisical and emotional condition. I phoned the hotel and one of the staff members was so friendly and tried to support me. Then he lawd a mercy and offered to take a taxi and paid for that after my arrival at the hotel. Two days ago the airlines found my luggage and I am going to another destination. However, I would really appreciate it, if you could transfer my little gift to that member of personel which will be attached to this package as well as my best regards.

Thank you kindly in advance.

Yours faithfully,

Sarah Brown

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...r hotel. I arrived at the hotel two week ago. Unfortunately, the air company had...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48280012294 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688172043011 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2047187315 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5454545455 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166258297176 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583575391459 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544650908931 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931789614325 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448305446776 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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