tell about your job
Dear Lisa,
Thank you for your present that recently reached for a few days ago. I hope you would be fine about everything. Anyway, I am writing to tell you about my new job.
After graduating from my university, I decided to trace the first job. Actually, it was purely difficult for me due to lacking of experience. Fortunately, I applied for a first job successfully. This job concentrated on teaching children in remote regions in order that they could acquire knowledge. Beforehand, I had to suffer from pressure about numerous aspects including moving or transmit for children. Gradually, I was familiar with my work and I got amazed about it. Although, my job was quite hard, I was exceedingly happy because of children and colleague. They always ready to assist me whatever I need.
And I hope you could feel my happiness like me. I am looking forward to receiving from your response.
Sincerely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Lisa, Thank you for your present that recently...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ceiving from your response. Sincerely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, first, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87741935484 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86871241607 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670967741935 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2911627082 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.1538461538 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9230769231 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282546791405 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890215190323 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084783302605 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179260592555 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973937478387 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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