More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is widely argued that an increasing number of people should spend absolute priority to famous brands including clothes, car or other items. While there is a strong case for this view, I strongly agree that it is outweighed by positive development.
Well-known brands always attract to majority people based on two primary reasons. One reason is that it depends on strong business strategy that belongs its company. Actually, it can be seen that there are numerous brand advertisement in several streets, thus inducing attention commuters. For instance, when they come to Vietnam, they find it easy to watch commercial video in order to introduce user about product benefits. Moreover, now and again, businessman reinforce strategy such as reduce cost or buy one get one to absorb the eyes of the user. Another reason is that famous brands bring wonderful quality. According to the statistics, Apple brand is the best seller related to technology due to its quick features, with 73%. Contrast with Samsung, it accounts for 27%. Therefore, famous brands win customer’s trust.
From the above reasons, I definitely agree that people should use well-known brands because of numerous values. A person said that “ the more money you pay, the more quality you get”, that proves through some examples. People could pay a high cost for product to use longer than others. For instance, a famous car called Mercedes brings comfortable and safe quality for users in spite of high price. It could prevent them from barrier or danger.
In conclusion, besides other brands, I also assume that people should choose well-known brands due to its guarantee.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ell-known brands due to its guarantee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18587360595 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62250202945 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635687732342 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6650943579 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0588235294 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251388119434 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683700498015 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575011721843 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140398574892 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341085059633 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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