Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this a positive or negative development?
Numerous people say that countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Whether or not this is a positive or negative development. Personally, I strongly agree that this is the drawbacks outweigh the benefits
In my opinion, buying the same products anywhere in the world is purely disadvantages which comes from various reasons. Firstly, it is showed that over exchange commercial in countries. From two decades ago, countries start learning mutual development in order to improve by themselves. However, most of the countries is extended copying thus people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. For instance, American uncovers the Apple Watch that is famous electronic products afterward, China has the same products without quality. Especially, numerous businessman exchanged the real and the fake in order to have high revenue. Furthermore, buying the same products anywhere in the world makes countries lose featured things. Let me imagine about the future if you did not want to travel anywhere in the world because you did not realize the difference between countries. Or the outstanding things of the countries no longer attract to them, that is terrible. For instance, people coming from over the world knew about Honda brand which is created by Japanese. But the china also create electronic products like the way Japanese made such as motorbike, steam fan, cooker. Therefore, over copying is essential problems, it is not only trading exchange but also losing featured countries.
In conclusion, I definitely believe that countries should not over exchange leading to have numerous the same products
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...he same products anywhere in the world. Whether or not this is a positive or negative developm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29889298893 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71073837884 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542435424354 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.311993169 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445764305193 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137341274854 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160684198155 0.0667982634062 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322447121507 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203760805503 0.056905535591 358% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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