Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are various learning ways for students such as studying in a group or studying alone. Personally, I assume that it would be better to study alone due to its advantage.
In the one hand, studying in a group is the effective way to train children based on numerous reasons. First of all, children stand a chance of connecting with other people, extraordinary teamwork. Most of the foreign schools often pay attention to the way of working as a group, thus foreign students are dynamic and powerful. They could communicate with each other, acquire more knowledge in order to upgrade student intelligence. They can give some advice or ideas to promote a group pathway. Thanks to teamwork ability, they would train their soft skills that purely advantage for them when they apply for a job. For instance, since my sister studied abroad, she became more confident and flexible. She said that the foreign requirement is that students had to actively participate group activities to learn a lot of knowledge. Moreover, students would have determination and perseverance because of benefits that come from working as a group. Studying in a group different from studying personally since students have responsibility to every member in a group. They could contribute together to create definitely idea thanks to everyone’s listening. As far as I know, in a massive competition, award always belongs to teamwork because every one person is always not as well as teamwork.
In the other hand, in my opinion, studying by oneself is crucial as well. In Southeast Asia, governments highly recommend people should self-study because they assume that studying alone helps students more concentrate on what they studied. It is completely wasting if students will not sum up the knowledge by oneself. For instance, Nguyen Qui - a person win award in math competition due to studying alone without studying coming from teacher. Hence, people need to have a suitable way for themselves in order to enforce their knowledge.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people should combine both of this view at the same time to bring the best outcome.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12820512821 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84099999855 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561253561254 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4225305814 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379259668481 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105505575742 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732119743784 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224142604765 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068189488603 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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