Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The positive effects of self-taught and group study that give learners are undeniable. Both ways of learning have their advantages to my perspective.

On one hand, It is believed that two heads work better than one and the collaboration in studying is the evidence for this quote. It is a fact that studying in group creates opportunities for people to share the knowledge and acquire new things from their teammates. Therefore, students’ teamwork skills would be improved to serve their future career. Besides, It is easier come up with ideas to handle the problems from the projects when creating the cooperation to study. Moreover, Being in collaboration means people have the duty to contribute to the overall work of the group. Therefore, students would be motivated to work in responsibility

On the other hand, It can be argued that self-education has diversified advantages. Firstly, studying alone helps people to get better concentration. Memorizing information and revising for an exam could be hard without the high concentration. Secondly , The independence is the gift that learning without mentor could bring for students thanks to their efforts to plan and complete study tasks. Therefore, youngsters could learn at their own pace which is not influenced by others

In conclusion, Group learning is suitable for doing projects and presentations whereas self learning is the best way to memorize information and revise exams. I do hold the belief that both kind of learning are effective for students but It is necessary to choose the appropriate way of studying to achieve the highest efficiency in acquiring knowledge

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, therefore, whereas, as to, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33716475096 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07468985949 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8721567398 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28520482796 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102064195584 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650646242176 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170447631273 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00785508220853 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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