Nowadays most people try to balance between work and other parts of lives Unfortunately not many achieve this balance What are the problems of this Suggest some solution to solve the problem

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Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other parts of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the problems of this? Suggest some solution to solve the problem?

In recent times, a great number of people fail to balance between work and other parts of lives. This essay will give an insight into these problems and gives my solutions

To the ways of my thinking, the main reason causes this problem is the development of society. It creates more things to do, more relationships to keep up and more worries to solve. Firstly, the disproportion between work and other aspects of lives leaves people no time to taking care of their health. Instead of taking exercises, they will have to sacrifice their daily physical and recreational activities to work. Therefore, the accumulation of stress give rise to most of the diseases in daily life. Secondly, the work-life imbalance has negative effects on social relationships as a result of losing the connection with family, friends and love relationship. For instance, busy parents usually have to sacrifice the time that they should have spent on taking care of their children. Therefore, they could get bad manners and easily get into social issues.

It is not easy to solve these problems but it doesn’t mean there is no way to mitigate them. First of all, in order to spend time effectively, figuring out the most important tasks to focus on is the most important thing to do. There are too many unnecessary stuffs to do everytime and nobody can solve all of them just in 24 hours a day. Secondly, It is necessary to sketch out a flexible schedule to draw the direction for every single tasks, what to do and when to done it.Without the schedule people will easily be stucked, and don’t know what to focus on.Last but not least , Getting enough sleep will help people to recharge their life energy after stressful work hours. Therefore, people will have more energy to do finish more tasks.

In conclusion, finding out the way to balance between work and other parts of lives is complex, but there always have a solution for this issue if we try to solve it smartly

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83235294118 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57913512206 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4812611024 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262882119236 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080283554191 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858324727115 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198418115533 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895349688259 0.056905535591 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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