Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, there is a positive trend that playing sports become an essential part in society. However, some people think that sport is just not more than a leisure activity. This essay will give an insight into this situation and provide my personal perspective.

On one hand, Many people hold the belief that sport plays a pivotal role in our life. Firstly, It is an undeniable fact that sport strengthens our health and stamina. By playing sport frequently, people could release the toxics out of their bodies and improve cardiovascular and respiratory health in order to stay away from diseases. Secondly, Sport allows people to recharge their batteries after stressful working or studying hours. Moreover, It helps release stress and rebalances their mental health and relationships. There is a buttload of evidence to show that people who play sports frequently are less likely to have psychological problems than non-sports players.

On the other hand, to some people, sports are not considered to be a major part in their life because not everyone has the ability to be professional sports players. They hold the belief that sport wastes too much time because it makes them tired after playing and cannot do others tasks after the workout. However, It is still a good way to share free time with families and friends because it helps tighten the bond between humans. Therefore, they just do sport as a simple workout to relax their bodies and their mind in their spare time.

In conclusion,the importance of sports is still controversial issues to many people but I believe that sport could be considered as a leisure activity, but it does play a significant role in society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03928571429 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6812819619 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5755701139 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283520137266 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11025070005 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109352090655 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203722195803 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957880839063 0.056905535591 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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