Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

<div style="font-size: medium; white-space: normal;"><div class="node__content"><div><div class="node__content"><p>In the global era, most of the people in the world are playing various sports, such as football, gymnastics, basketball, jogging, etc. The important aspects of sports are for proving health rates and happiness. In my view, I agree to the statement that sports take an important role for all of humankind. I hold this view for some reasons which are set out below.</p><p>To begin with, I would like to reckon that sports were categorized by the world health organization (who) as the great medicine for reducing numerous people's illness. The survey from world health organization stated that 80% of people who always routinize do the sports twice a week, their bodies lean-to immune from the plethora of sickness. In contrast, humankind who do not take sports activities are risky to get plentiful diseases.</p><p>On the other hand, sports activities also enable to escalate the number of interests of a country. The data of health sports centre stated that some developed countries, such as united Kingdom, Ireland, as well as united states which all of the concern to facilitate many sports infrastructures and events for their citizens, tend to improve their number of economical benefits significantly. These conditions occurred that the quality of health and happiness have an implication towards the quality of people's productivity.</p><p>However, there are some people have been believing that sports activities do not affect health and happiness, and it was alleged just as a leisure activities. Unfortunately, there are no one pieces of evidence for supporting this view.</p><p>Finally, I believe that sports could improve the health rates, happiness, as well as productivity of the society.</p></div></div><div style="padding: 10px 0px; width: 986px; min-width: 125px;"><ins class="adsbygoogle" data-ad-client="ca-pub-0840098069707635" data-ad-slot="1869373621" data-ad-format="auto" data-adsbygoogle-status="done" style="display: block; height: 0px;"><ins id="aswift_2_expand" style="display: inline-table; border: none; height: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; position: relative; visibility: visible; width: 986px; background-color: transparent;"></ins></ins></div></div></div><div style="font-size: medium; white-space: normal; padding: 10px 0px; width: 986px; min-width: 125px;"><ins class="adsbygoogle" data-ad-client="ca-pub-0840098069707635" data-ad-slot="1869373621" data-ad-format="auto" data-adsbygoogle-status="done" style="display: block; height: 0px;"><ins id="aswift_2_expand" style="display: inline-table; border: none; height: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; position: relative; visibility: visible; width: 986px; background-color: transparent;"></ins></ins></div>

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1191, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...Ireland, as well as united states which all of the concern to facilitate many sports infra...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1315, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...tizens, tend to improve their number of economical benefits significantly. These condition...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1524, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...>

However, there are some people have been believing that sports activities do not affect he...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1635, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...s, and it was alleged just as a leisure activities. Unfortunately, there are no one pieces...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so, well, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2665.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 7.65804597701 5.12529762239 149% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.95213906581 2.80592935109 283% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 372.847534457 49.4020404114 755% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.111111111 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.6666666667 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0654588535127 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709679937648 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510588343374 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654588535127 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 50.2224549098 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 27.74 12.4159519038 223% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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