Some teachers think that international student exchange programs would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some teachers think that international student exchange programs would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, Exchange program is the new trend of modern education and also have positive impacts on students. Nevertheless, Is there any disadvantage of this kind of education? This essay will give an insight into both advantages and disadvantage of this program.

On one hand, there are a great number of advantages when students decide to participate in exchange programs. Firstly, International exchange students will get opportunities to immerse themselves in a new culture and meet different people from all over the world. For instance, these teenagers will have chance to communicate with locals and learn the customs and traditions from them. Secondly, It is undeniable that staying away from home for international exchange helps students a chance to challenge themselves and widen their horizons. It is a fact that without daily support from their parents, these students have to learn to cook, clean, manage their budgets, make their own decisions and also travel alone. Therefore, they could develop their personal skills effectively although studying exchange just for a short period.

On the other hand, there are still some drawbacks that against the advantages we mentioned above. Firstly, It is inevitable to get culture shock. Exchange students might be faced with unfamiliar customs and traditions, that could make them really hard to catch up with the daily life in new environment. And when they are familiar with the environment of the exchange country, They have to come back home and the culture shock occurs one more time. Secondly, Because of the difference of programs between universities of two countries , there are abundant of difficulties to face when teenagers engage in exchange projects. For instance, when I came to Italy for exchange programs, I have difficulties catching up with lectures due to my poor language skills.

In conclusion, I hold the belief that the advantages of international exchange programs will overweigh the disadvantages. what students could study from this kind of programs is undeniable, although there are many difficulties in adapting new cultures and environment

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42642642643 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93981638007 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528528528529 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0896035432 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231759406411 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781389841267 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458515902387 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145132998947 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166214658043 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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