There is a group of people in your community that needs help. Write a letter to your company director and say
– Describe this group.
– What kind of help do they need?
– How will this group and the community benefit from it?
Dear sir,
I am writing to you to suggest a group of people from within our community, that are in need of help, as recepients of our annual community welfare funds. Allow me to elaborate.
As you already know, our city welcomed 10000 Indonesians who were affected by the Tsunamis of last year, and these people are living in the outskrits of our city in dire poverty. Their kids have no access to schooling and education because the state run schools only allow citizen kids and private schools are way too expensive. Although there are some humanitarian groups that are providing them nutritious food on a daily basis, there is not a single organization that is helping their kids get education, which is what they need most at this time to make sure their kids have a better future.
Thus, I reckon that we must organize monthly workshops in which we teach their kids STEM: Science, Technology, Engineering and Math fields and also some basic coding and computer programming skills so that they can find tech jobs in the future. This will not only benefit them but also strengthen our community as well by adding more skilled workers in the job market.
Thanks,
Truly,
Jason
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, thus, well, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86341463415 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45813972794 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663414634146 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.529934754 44.8134815571 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.625 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19414660523 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720750420453 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910668680287 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142397463835 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716544347609 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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