Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples.
Getting married is one of the most important events of an individual's life. As such the money spent in these events reaches astronomical numbers. But is this a good practice? While some believe it to be totally file, others strictly oppose such extravagance. This essay will analyze both camps before a reasoned conclusion is formed.
Firstly, the proponents of this practice claim that marriage is a once in a life time event, which leaves a permanent mark in memories of the people involved, and thus should be made as big of a celebration as possible. For example, many people delay their wedding until they have saved enough money to make their special occasion the most memorable one. Thus, since these people save money especially for this event, they feel that it is absolutely okay to spend as much as they want. From this it is quite evident why this view has garnered support.
However, on the other hand, some argue that this practice could have detrimental effects on our society in a number of ways. For one, this trend of spending without any moderation can deter younger generation and the less fortunate ones, who do not have a lot of money to spend, from getting married. In addition, often the money spend in weddings is on unnecessary items which have no materialistic benefits. For instance, most of the couples import chandeliers from foreign countries to setup in their wedding halls, and have specially designed curtains for them, which cost a lot and has no real benefit other than just being used as a means of boasting and showoff. If the couple spend a little carefully, then they can save a lot of money which can be used somewhere else. Thus, this makes it clear why this side of argument has such strong following.
To sum up, since wedding is a special occasion people feel that it is ok to spend without limits, but this is not welcomed by some because it deters the poorer members of society from getting married and also because there is a lot of extravagance involved. I believe that it is not a good practice to spend without consideration on weddings or any other events and people should be very careful with their spendings. Finally, it is predicted that this trend will slowly diminish from our society as people realize its many drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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...mportant events of an individuals life. As such the money spent in these events re...
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Suggestion: lifetime
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...y as people realize its many drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78337531486 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52381885859 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521410579345 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0687323828 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191622214951 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628484474059 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435411315273 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123595811456 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265836670249 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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