There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my grievances with regards to the reliability of bus number 12. Since it takes the fastest route and has limited stops, I use it daily to commute to work. However, in the last two weeks the frequency has been erratic and the bus has not been arriving as per the time chart.
Let me explain the situation in detail. initially, the bus used to arrive at 8 a.m. sharp, thus enabling me to reach my office on time. Nowadays it does not have a fixed schedule and arrives according to it's whims and fancies, sometimes even as late as 8.30. As a result it causes me to reach late and miss many important meetings, thus hampering my productivity. These days I am forced to travel by train which is a very long and harrowing journey. Moreover, many travellers from my area have been experiencing similar inconveniences.
Keeping the situation in mind I request you to immediately ensure that your staff adheres strictly to the timings in order to avoid any unpleasant situations. Additionally a surprise check of them can also be initiated.
I look forward to your reply
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Initially
...Let me explain the situation in detail. initially, the bus used to arrive at 8 a.m. sharp...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...der to avoid any unpleasant situations. Additionally a surprise check of them can also be in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, moreover, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75621890547 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75628176734 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686567164179 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4165525112 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152161833231 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486451637859 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426018513114 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807020486928 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339511485895 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.