You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to
go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library.
Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do
about it.
Dear Mr Lee,
I am writing with regards to the the general knowledge books I borrowed from the library. Unfortunately, my grandmother had an accident and is completely bedridden and hence, we all are leaving tonight to visit her. As a result, I will not be able to drop by the school and return the books.
Let me explain my situation in detail. In view of the upcoming presentations, I had borrowed all the books relevant to the topic to prepare well before the due date. Moreover, to avoid any last minute panic situations, I gathered all the study material and prepared some notes in advance. Nevertheless, for I will be out of town and unable to present, these books need to be returned to the library immediately. Another student who will be replacing me needs these books to get up to speed.
In order to do so, I would like to request you to send a peon to my place after school so that the books can be made available in time. Finally, please accept my sincere apologies for all the inconveniences caused.
Hoping my situation will be considered favorably.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...Mr Lee, I am writing with regards to the the general knowledge books I borrowed from...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...Mr Lee, I am writing with regards to the the general knowledge books I borrowed from...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70256410256 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81313720957 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8674256425 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4166666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162370542521 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519817802165 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421670226085 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084500289737 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541594243589 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.