You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to
go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do
about it.
I’m writing to you, to inform you that last month I borrowed books from the school library, to do my final report, but I had a family issue and I couldn’t bring the books back on time and missed the due date.
Unfortunately, one of my cousins had a chronic disease and he got badly sick lately, so were obliged to travel to our original country to visit him and stand next to his family.
I would like from your side to take this situation into a consideration, and even if you can extend the borrowing time of the books for two more weeks, until I arrive back to school and have some extra time to finish my final report, where I can submit it on time at the end of the year.
Hope I can hear from you as soon as possible and accept my apologize for being late to return the books.
Sincerely Yours,
Student
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o return the books. Sincerely Yours, Student
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31847133758 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35167309451 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3827417154 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.6 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 16.8248392259 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278388097801 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120154447674 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933468276653 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150193059593 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798776987902 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.37 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.