Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a regular user of your transportation service and take your buses to travel to and from my office. I am writing to bring to your attention a few some issues that are happening daily to me and other commuters.
First, during the last couple of weeks, your buses are making reoccurring delays and this is affecting our arrival in our workplaces on time. To add more grief, a few buses do not arrive at all. To add more grief, a few buses do not arrive at all. A number of times i had to wait for more than an hour, and than hail a taxi to reach my office. This situation forces me and many other travellers to either take the congested bus and stand all the way in miserable condition or wait for the next bus. I believe this will reduce people trust in your service.
I suggest that you add a few more transport to accommodate the passengers and manage the timetable rigidly.
Thank your for giving the matter your attention and i hope to hear you reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
Danny Albright
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...do not arrive at all. A number of times i had to wait for more than an hour, and ...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
... had to wait for more than an hour, and than hail a taxi to reach my office. This si...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l reduce people trust in your service. I suggest that you add a few more transp...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or giving the matter your attention and i hope to hear you reply soon. Yours f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43979057592 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43704764583 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0558528204 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132619459596 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538036660538 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372361293323 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757368313408 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307962748146 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.