There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.
Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
Say what happened the last times you complained
Explain what you want the manager to do
Good morning Mr Andrew, as a manager of the sport centre training, my name is ella, one of your member.
there is a problem with the changing room doors, some of them can not be opened from inside and you need someone to open it for you from the outside. I already told the office boy about the door but there is still no changes about the door.
The last time i went to your sports centre, i was trapped in the changing room for about one hour because i can not open the door so i need to ask some help to open the door for me from the outside by shouting as loud as i could.
I hope as a manager, you can probably fix this problem by checking the problem that the door had and replace it with a new door if it is necessary as soon as possible, it might affect other people and make them uncomfortable
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hanging room for about one hour because i can not open the door so i need to ask ...
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...hour because i can not open the door so i need to ask some help to open the door ...
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...from the outside by shouting as loud as i could. I hope as a manager, you c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 654.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.06211180124 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09827601595 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5183731831 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 16.8248392259 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270471150801 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134567879931 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581726933609 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150391276525 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045874679556 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.86 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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