There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.   Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:Describe what the problem with the changing rooms

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There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.   

Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:

Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is

Say what happened the last times you complained

Explain what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction with the no service received even after raising the request multiple times for issues related to changing rooms in our sports center.

The changing room ceiling is having leakage which affects adversely in the rainy season. also, there is no fan in rooms because of that it smells very bad. also, some room's door is not able to close and people have to shut it with a bang.

I raised the request one month ago for the same issue, though the management confirmed to me to get it done in the next 10 days. Although it's been more than 20 days no one arrive till now.

As your sports center plays a reputed image in our localities. I want you to pay attention to our issues. As we are a regular member of the sports center and it harms the reputation of a center with these faulty services.

I look forward to a swift solution to this problem.

Yours faithfully,

Aman

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... affects adversely in the rainy season. also, there is no fan in rooms because of th...
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Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...oms because of that it smells very bad. also, some rooms door is not able to close a...
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Line 9, column 168, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rooms'' or 'room's'?
Suggestion: rooms'; room's
... of that it smells very bad. also, some rooms door is not able to close and people ha...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an 20 days no one arrive till now. As your sports center plays a reputed imag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60693641618 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37377386572 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2472258731 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4545454545 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327877607251 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942767628719 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641224832942 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14006537074 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870127849692 0.0580467560999 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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