Some people believe that media (such as newspapers) should be allowed to publish information about the private life of people. Others say that people have a right to privacy and the issue must be controlled or even stopped. Give your own opinion.
These days newspapers print private life stories of all celebrities. it is considered by some that the government should impose a law to save someone's personal information getting public, whilst others advocate it is not required. this essay will argue that despite the fact a fan needs to know about their celebrities, every person has the right to keep up their life privacy hidden. Hence, the government should control the overgrowing paparazzi.
On the one hand, it is argued that celebrities' lives are given to them by the public, so they have full authority to know about their details. In other words, every famous personality becomes famous, when people love their work. For example, the survey conducted by The Times in March 2019 reported that the leather jacket fashion boom in the Indian market, when a Bollywood superstar Shahrukh Khan wore it in his one movie; However, many artists got attacked by trollers on the social media, who do not understand their fashion sense.
On another hand, many public figures do not celebrate their special moments as they are afraid of a big crowd, who follow them everywhere. this is a reason some artists unable to enjoy their personal space and moved to other countries, where no one knows about their identities. For instance, the study showed in Amity University in march 2011, stated that Ajay Devgan a Tollywood hero faced a 3hrs traffic jam because of his followers when the newspaper published about his travel to famous Mahalakshmi temple on his birthday.
To conclude, this essay suggests that Although the public creates superstars and they should know about their lives, yet every superstar has a right to live his own life so the government should apply some rule in printing their personal information in newspapers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09797297297 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54020807198 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.674367801 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.181818182 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152644802827 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638349444809 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348404031171 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101821536862 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433376787894 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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