All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think that having a range of subjects is better for a children’s future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Every mother and father requires excellent opportunities for their kids. it is considered by some that educational institutions should help pupils' skills, whilst others advocate various courses could help in student's studies. this essay believes variety in an academic syllabus could lead any child to choose his interest. this essay will discuss both viewpoints, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Experts and professors who have expertise in coaching could provide practical skills to any students. this is because teachers know the most natural path to explain any complex scenario to their students. Despite this, If students do not have an interest in one particular subject, they distract from classes easily. For example, the survey conducted by The Times in March 2019 reported that 80% of male students bunk home science subject classes from their schools. Hence, institutions could not help students with their proficiency unless children have an interest in the course.
On the other hand, several courses give freedom to students to select their interest courses. As a consequence, students get higher scores in their examinations, which drives them to pick the same course for their higher studies. Therefore, it is agreed that providing numerous course options to any child could help them in their future. For instance, the study showed in Amity University in June 2011 stated that 90% of students who study science subjects by leaving commerce subjects in their secondary schools significantly likely to get various jobs after completing their courses.
To conclude, this essay suggests that schools hire certified experienced people who have the potential to transfer their skills to children, yet it depends on students' interest, what field to opt for their future. So providing them with a number of options could help them in selecting better opportunities for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45945945946 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66377155016 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0509888903 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239096336932 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814118972352 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549213729115 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158362880375 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604715814792 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.