All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children’s future.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Every parent wants the best options for their youngsters. There are many individuals who believe that schools should educate children skills while others presume learning a variety of subjects is good for a children’s future. According to point of view, learning a children's skill would help schools children to get mature at an early age, whereas a variety of courses will secure a good job in their future.
On the one hand, most people consider that educating schools should guide children skills, the reason behind is that these days adolescents are occupying their time in unnecessary activities such as wasting time on mobile phones, watching television every time, demanding for expensive products and gadgets from whom they are taking care of. Because of this reason, parents want them to seek some new skills that will enhance their knowledge and emerge creativity.
On the other hand, few people perceive that a wide range of subjects should instruct that would be helpful for the teenagers in the future. This is because, it is often said that, nowadays the competition has increased among small children and there are several fields entered into the market. Parents want their child to get familiar before choosing the specific field of work, that would also benefit them while enrolling for the graduation.
Lastly, according to my belief, I reckon school academy should prepare their student for child development skills as it will make them sensible, however, a variety of materials in the school courses will increase the probability of job for young adults in the future. Therefore, both the methods of teaching for child grooming is significant and cannot be ignored completely. Although, it may work singly by analyzing the importance.
In conclusion, those people who assume that skills for child development are essential since they are not managing time properly, on the other hand, few groups of people believe that there should increase in the subject as they want their small children to make up their mind in young age. While it will favor them for in the real world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, i reckon, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10465116279 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49285078369 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549418604651 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8227774366 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.076923077 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370114574673 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135136370285 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788941262404 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216092629988 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069592495262 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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