Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?
I disagree with the statement that unwealthy people faces the problems at the time of doing for graduation as compared to the wealthy one.
People who don’t have money, they faces more struggle in getting addmission in to the university because there’s background is not good, Mindset is not up to the mark where it should be. They think different from rich people.
In Pakistan, if we talk about poor people they feels numerous problems. They don’t have the money for the education, because of this they are ignored and if they passed with the criteria they sell their’s seat to the rich people. Dow University is considered to be one of top university in Pakistan. If a poor people passed with good marks in the test, they have the change to take the money and give it to the rich people. This term is very common in Pakistan i.e Taking a seat on self finance basis instead of merit.
Because of no money since they born, there's craving for the money is more, they think that if they get money and at least they could buy a house or do investment so that they can marry, there’s life would not be difficult as they previously faced since their childhood.
Poor people also faces many difficulties like the expenses which they have to do at the time of getting education in University, This expenses includes transportations, assignments and daily routine spending.
Although rich and poor people are the same creature by God but there’s thinking, ideas, difficulties, struggle for achievements are not the homogeneous in every walk of life. Either looking for admission for graduation or after completing the education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'face', 'fax'
Suggestion: face; fax
... People who don't have money, they faces more struggle in getting addmission in ...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...stan, if we talk about poor people they feels numerous problems. They don't have...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...merit. Because of no money since they born, theres craving for the money is more, ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... Because of no money since they born, theres craving for the money is more, they thi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93571428571 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76141185051 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2410155089 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105818178318 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503637978784 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318193593163 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614319013143 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170569721092 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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