Some people think governments are responsible for people’s health. Others believe it is an individual’s responsibility.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many individuals believe governments are accountable for public’s health. While others feels that it is the duty of every single person. In my opinion, I reckon governments companies are to develop hospitals, while every individual is responsible for mantain clealiness for common public health.
On the one hand, most of the people say government entities are answerable for country’s health. The main reason is that, all the internal matters are owned by government organizations. All the signing powers for the approval of projects like plantation in colonies, contruction of parks as well as furnishing filtered water, and development of hospitals to its citizens. Therefore, these are the core duties of government organizations that is why many public people presume its their ownership.
On the other hand, few people assume that general public is taking care of common people’s health. This is due, these general people live and eat cuisines on daily basis, garbage and scrap items is generated. Because of this issue, it is often said that, this damages the environment which creates pollution and is harmful for the residents’ health.
Lastly, according to my point of view, it is the duty of both, governement institutes as well as local publics for dealing the matter of common publics health. The reason behind is that, it is a collaborative efforts which has to be performed by both functions independently, local government has to design small clinics and more wards in the hospitals in rural and urban areas. Whereas, local public’s needs to attention on planting a tree in to their homes and ensure that every area where they are living should be neat and tidy.
In conclustion, the role of the government firms is to establish nursing hospitals, on the other hand, the occupation / obligation of the people is to make society dirt free. However, both units are equally answerable for delivering and mantaining the proper health to people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... for public’s health. While others feels that it is the duty of every single pers...
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... that is why many public people presume its their ownership. On the other hand, ...
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...lic people presume its their ownership. On the other hand, few people assume tha...
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Suggestion: public
... the other hand, few people assume that general public is taking care of common people’s healt...
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Suggestion: and
...he duty of both, governement institutes as well as local publics for dealing the matter of...
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Suggestion: publics'; public's
...ublics for dealing the matter of common publics health. The reason behind is that, it i...
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...n behind is that, it is a collaborative efforts which has to be performed by both funct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, i reckon, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20125786164 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87431243202 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550314465409 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9099315103 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32126127822 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107614367665 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702309658957 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170822977754 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539198082559 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.