There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason.Do you agree or disagree?
Money is the only reason for motivating and encouraging an employee at workplace. This essay totally disagrees with this idea because there are other factors that includes comfortable environment and benefits should be provided by employer.
In the twenty century, people’s mindsets are changing time to time. They prefer working culture of office should be more relax and enjoyable. This leads to make happy, by spending time like a family in office hours.For example, Novartis is a Multinational Pharmaceutical Company which is known to be best place for employees. They mainly focus on their working environment. They ensure that unethical behaviour should not be between employee. They have made the policy of whistle blowing by ensuring with strict compliance. Their’s decisions are unbiased with zero tolerance policy.
More over, there are other benefits which are merely on job now a days. Employee who is working in company, his focus is to fulfill basic necessities. The foremost includes the house, which is need for every single person. By getting house loan facility from employer’s, they can think and build their home. For Example, In Pakistan most of the people consider to work in bank. Because bank provides house loan facilities to their employees with low amount of interest. Staff takes loan from bank according to their salary's’ entitlement and revert it. Although people get low salaries but they choose this job so that they will avail this facility. Other wise purchasing a house in today’s for a man, it is an arduous task.
In conclusion, Company’s environmental factors and other benefits in term of providing house loan facility to their employees. I therefore believe that employers consider these reasons for motivation and working long on same organization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37412587413 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92883671496 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3030958269 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.85 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156469178881 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511886568401 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753847847588 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112984289707 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505266434451 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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