You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter
give your reasons for wanting the job
explain why you think you can do the job
describe any relevant experience you have
Dear Sir,
I saw you company advertisement on the newspaper for the post of local tour guide.
I have been working in the Bukhari Travels as the same position as i have applied for. I am having an experience of 6 years with the Bukhari Travels and my education background is relevant according to this advertisement.I pursued a Master degree in Business Administration and also did the certification on Customer Satisfaction.
By these skills i am very sure that i can improve in your company profits . I have also list of potential customers who usually come for travelling on quarterly basis.They are most of the Corporate Customers of different organization like Unilever, P&G and other financial Institutions.
Since i have started my job i have achieved various amount of certifications . They are Best Seller of 2017, Milestone of Year 2016 and Most Customer Retention of the year.
Therefore i request you to consider me for the following post . I would be very thankful to you .
Regards
Tahir Hussain
Job Seeker
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he same position as i have applied for. I am having an experience of 6 years with...
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Suggestion: I
...elevant according to this advertisement.I pursued a Master degree in Business Adm...
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...elevant according to this advertisement.I pursued a Master degree in Business Adm...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...stomer Satisfaction. By these skills i am very sure that i can improve in your...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... By these skills i am very sure that i can improve in your company profits . I...
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...at i can improve in your company profits . I have also list of potential customers...
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Suggestion: They
... come for travelling on quarterly basis.They are most of the Corporate Customers of ...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...&G and other financial Institutions. Since i have started my job i have achieved v...
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...chieved various amount of certifications . They are Best Seller of 2017, Milestone...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...Most Customer Retention of the year. Therefore i request you to consider me for the fo...
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...mer Retention of the year. Therefore i request you to consider me for the foll...
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...ou to consider me for the following post . I would be very thankful to you . Re...
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...g post . I would be very thankful to you . Regards Tahir Hussain Job Seeker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12352941176 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14968221957 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2326203619 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214180280782 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085905126043 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615508155964 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128195386875 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075101786529 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.