these days with advances in technology more and more people are working from home. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion
The advent of technology has made the world smaller and there is an increasing trend of working from home across the globe. this task will highlight the benefits such as reduce travel that increase the efficiency and this flexibility creates loyalty among company employees. also, there are disadvantages like internet connectivity issues creating slippage of delivery schedules. In my opinion, work from home is an efficient option for those who are employed in Information technology.
Firstly, most of the offices primarily those related to computing and IT-enabled services are in the outskirts of the city and commute is time-consuming. Additionally, traveling long hours either in public transport or company provided the facility, still, the employees feel exhausted and cannot concentrate. so, the option of working from home shall be exercised and this would mean work could be performed more efficiently alongside better quality is assured. Furthermore, this kind of flexibility would boost employee morale and increases loyalty towards the organization that needs a lifetime otherwise.
On the flip side, we could see the demerits like incompetent internet connectivity issues at home would lead to slippage of delivery schedules and any breach costs a fortune to the company and trust is lost. Since the customer is the king any miss in delivery would mean that a repeat customer is lost and also has a long-term impact. some employees could misuse this facility provided by companies for perosnal benefit without actually working. Finally, the employees working in isolation could also be a reason for communication differences. so, they should be mutual trust among the team before facilitating their employees to exercise this facility.
To conclude, although there are issues with internet or misuse of working from home option by some, it has advantages like more efficiency by less commuting and loyalty among its employees. I opine that the proper usage of working from home shall definitely benefit employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 937.175257732 184% => OK
No of words: 316.0 206.0 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47151898734 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8754157861 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 290.88556701 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.2663326637 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.266666667 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201275761181 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680161236182 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671280387513 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138091225731 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659594051999 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 41.2886597938 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.