Topic: You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Emma,
Hope you are everything doing great. I know it would be a surprise to you that I have finally moved to my new house for a long time. You know, it was not an easy decision for me, but the owner wanted to sell their house this year, so I decided to move to a new place.
I am now living in a fully furnished new house in Delta where is cheaper than Richmond, and it has two huge bedrooms with queen-size beds and two modern bathrooms, a spacious living room, an open kitchen design, and a parking area. I believe William is the happiest of all because he finally doesn’t need to find a public car parking anymore, especially in the winter. The best part is that the area is quiet and amazing natural beauty views. After living here seems like a dream come true.
I hope you would come and visit us soon, possibly next weekend because I believe you will also like my new house, and Jessica with us for a few days as well. It will be fun.
Lots of love,
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...quiet and amazing natural beauty views. After living here seems like a dream come tru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22872340426 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14336622787 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3382736227 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200663217817 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652935441613 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760054126895 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134121098506 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869093750761 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.