Dear Johnson,
I hope you are doing well in the holiday season. Thank you for your letter asking me for my advice concerning what kind of job will suit your qualification in my country, and I will try to make some useful suggestions.
Just in time, my friend asked me for help to find a robot control developer for her company which is one of the world biggest technology companies. They are looking for a robot control developer who has experience in ROS and safely robot systems, also need to present and show robot demo to customs. I am quite sure your study background and experience quite much to her requirement, and you will gain a lot in this company.
To speed up the process, send your resume to this email address career@gmail.com. Remember attached the robot navigation video which you show me last time, I think that project can attract my friend eyes.
Good luck! I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72619047619 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61004947782 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3296816536 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27424088424 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935138401878 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965872178851 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153064342522 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109891840098 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.