Dear Sir,
I am writing the letter with reference to the advertisement for the part-time job in your hotel during summer and would like to apply for that role.
I hold a hotel management degree and I have one year of experience in part-time hostel manager assistance in one of a hostel in my home country. I need to maintain statistical and financial records and plan maintenance work, events and room bookings. In addition, handling customer complaints and queries.
I am keen to know the details of the work. Could you please let me know the responsibility for this position? As I want to be ready before I start my work so that I will not disappoint you.
Furthermore, I will be appreciated that if you can give me working hour details and information about any hidden conditions. If possible, I would prefer daytime shifts because I need to go to class in the evening.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing the letter with reference t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, in addition, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78443113772 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88188855653 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9026814267 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6363636364 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314293631138 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865030089552 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070580451096 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144758277614 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756982285663 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.