A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when did he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear Tom,
How’re you doing, my friend? i’m just writing to let you know that I really need to take back the suitcase you borrowed a while ago.
it’s the black one with a Ferrari logo in the front and also it’s a smart suitcase that follows you everywhere automatically. I remember I lent you the case last month as you wanted to try the smart function before buying and you used it for your vacation in Italy.
i’m going to need it back soon because i’m having a trip to Seoul in June to visit my cousin there. He asked me to buy a lot of stuff and my 2 other cases are already full so I definitely have to put the rest in the one you borrowed.
Well, you actually don’t have to bring it to my house as I can drop by yours after work to pick it up. I think that’ll be much more convenient for both of us. If it’s ok, I’ll come on this Friday evening.
All the best,
Truong
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...m, How're you doing, my friend? i'm just writing to let you know that I r...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It&apos
...e suitcase you borrowed a while ago. it's the black one with a Ferrari logo in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
... used it for your vacation in Italy. i'm going to need it back soon because i&...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, well, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35795454545 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43828129034 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7196424959 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179884394002 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726404051334 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705032160473 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126097456291 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696584860593 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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