The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Some people say that governments should allocate their fundings to public services rather than wasting national budget on arts, music and theater. In my opinion, I wholeheartedly agree with this statement.
To begin with, financial support for the facilities of art is completely insane. In today’s world, the majority of people are no longer attracted to paintings and music and thus, keeping these creations and activities alive will not turn a profit. In Vietnam, for example, many museums and galleries are being left in the dust because the locals and even foreign tourists do not have any interests wasting a large amount of national budget every year. As can be seen, arts are not worth for governments to invest in because of the high probability of losing a substantial amount of money.
Meanwhile, there are some practical public services that extremely require attention from governments. Health care is the first important aspect that needs more governmental fundings. The financial support on this field will help to improve general life expectancy of humans, which is clearly more helpful than arts. If a country failed to improve the health care system and let its citizens suffer from illness, it would then have to spend even more money to reverse the situation. Similarly, education definitely needs governmental assistance because it decides a nation’s future. A strong formal education will produce more skilled workers for better countries’ development.
In conclusion, I assert that turning governmental support to public services is more contributive to the country’s economy than funding arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, similarly, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93442362038 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2265772195 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256643954156 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806763334189 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725366066078 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170065068447 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981682297158 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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