Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has become more common for adults to move to another country for work these days. However, opinions differ as to whether this development will bring positive or negative effects on their offspring. In my view, such a tendency is beneficial for the children.
To begin with, it is understandable why some people say that moving with parents to a foreign country would bring negative impacts on the children. One reason is that children could face some mental issues such as stress and depression due to culture shock and language barrier. Culture shock is the first thing children endure because they are completely unfamiliar with and not ready to adapt to the new lifestyle. The second problem is the language barrier which keeps children isolated from others. Since they are unable to communicate in the new place’s native language, kids would become afraid to interact with the local children leading to poor social experience.
However, I side with those who think that such a development will affect children positively. One reason to support my standpoint is that the educational system in the destination country will surely benefit the migrating children. Obviously, all systems available in the new country including education will be better as no one agrees to work in a nation that is inferior to their homeland. Indeed, surveys indicate that people only choose industrialized and civilized countries for settling. Take Korea where attracts numerous foreign workers for instance, many Vietnamese workers review that their bring-along children are under superior education compared to Vietnam’s system in all aspects. Moreover, all matters associated with moving overseas are temporary which means children’s current issues will go away in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that residing with family to another country offers great benefits to the children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41554054054 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79561372172 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0696641474 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234447591613 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823655125061 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489766324792 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153363490848 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647351153747 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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