There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Today, there are abundnt genres of music and it can be said that music plays a very important role in our spiritual life because of the benefits it brings. Among them can be mentioned traditional music and international music, for me traditional music is more important.
Music is an indispensable part of life because of a lots reasons. First of all, music has the effect of reflecting intelligence, thoughts, as well as a strong and profound impact on people's emotions. For example , it makes emotional vibrations deposited in the soul, helping people to understand and love life more, bringing people feelings of aesthetics and sophistication, etc. Secondly, music is also beneficial to human health. Such as past-paced music such as disco, chachacha, pop... helps us to be more alert, dynamic and sensitive and music without lyrics, piano, Baroque... also help reduce fatigue and stress in life.
There are many reasons why I think traditional music is more important than international music. First of all, traditional music contains deep spiritual values and cultural identities of each country. It is not only for entertainment, it also helps to preserve and transmit intangible values. Secondly, fewer and fewer people listen to traditional music, especially young people, so it is in danger of disappearing. That's why it needs more attention than international music.
In conclusion, it can not deny the advantages of music, specially music traditional. People need to both know how to accept new music and preserve traditional music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30894308943 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0368150912 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1015814185 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51551543344 0.244688304435 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2039462296 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157787840324 0.0667982634062 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370170777019 0.151304729494 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916763144392 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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