There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music has appeared for a long time. At first, music may be just sounds that come from daily life. Nowadays, music is growing rapidly day by day with numerous kinds of music and gradually becomes an indispensable part of each human being’s life.
Music is really important to humans today. Firstly, society is developing more and more, leading to people is busier to keep the wolf from the door. Therefore, they have to be under pressure a lot, and music is a means to help people refresh their minds after a day of hard work. Secondly, it is a way to boost people’s mood on special occasions, such as birthdays, weddings, etc. Music will make those parties more fascinating and happier. I can not imagine how would parties be if there was not music. Finally, Listening to a song that we like can help us relieve their sadness. Because when we have a difficulty or a sad story in our life but without a person to share, music will be a magical dose for our mood at that moment. After that, we can have more motivation to find solutions to overcome all of the troubles.
From my perspective, the traditional music of a country is more important. Because it is a vital part of the culture of a country. If it disappeared, the culture of that country would be no longer complete. Besides, because of having many different types of music in the world today, so not many people are keen on traditional music anymore as before. Therefore, developing traditional music today is extremely necessary. It not only preserves the culture but also promoting that country’s development, both economic and tradition. In addition, traditional musical also contributes to spreading the culture of that country to other countries around the world.
In conclusion, music has a significant effect and brings a lot of benefits for humans nowadays. We can listen to any song that we like; however, do not forget the traditional music of my country. Our responsibility is to preserve and promote it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80758017493 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77788258852 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0860905686 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9545454545 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453614489748 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140964517936 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114081432474 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278055907071 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743239669296 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.