There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is a major part of today’s life. It is true that various kinds of music exist that people across the world listen to. There are some compelling reasons that why music is needed; and furthermore, the main culprit reason that why traditional music has more value than the international one.
There are various reasons that why we require we need to listen to music. Firstly, it is considered as a great means of expressing our emotions, both for the singers and the ones who listen to their work. Since our tastes differ in many aspects of life, music is no exception, and people use it to feel the sense of energy, sadness, relaxation, excitement, and generally other feelings of humans. Secondly, now it has been proved by many psychologists that music has therapeutic effects. It simply means that some patients are cured through listening to particular music. Finally, academically speaking, many students find instrumental music fantastic while studying listening to them in the background. This way they gain more energy to prolong the study duration.
Another important trend that has provoked many debates is whether the international music is of more importance or the traditional. We should be happy that traditional music is still being produced as it has conventional values. In other words, the more there are these types of songs, the stronger popular the local tradition becomes. Due to the fact that music is such a major tool to save local people’s customs for the next generations, they should be preserved. However, more and more people are getting interested in worldwide types of music. And it can have detrimental effects on the traditional type. Although they international music might pique many people’s interest, especially the youngsters, they should not replace the traditional ones.
In conclusion, I think listening to music is a great way of enjoyment for us, and even can be applied for medical treatment. In terms of international or traditional music, I believe the latter is of more value; although the international one is expanding their popularity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14619883041 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89829658848 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8919947755 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6315789474 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510947925774 0.244688304435 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16591062922 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906123104875 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322134882292 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769317868092 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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