Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:* Introduce yourself* explain what the problem is* suggest solutions to the problem

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:

* Introduce yourself
* explain what the problem is
* suggest solutions to the problem

Dear Sirs Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to you to express my complaint about the noise that the construction work caused is causing/has caused to our living places.

My family live in the street near the construction site. We have to work hard during the day and need to rest in the evening and night. However, because of the noise from the work, we could not sleep. It negatively affected affects our health and we could not work effectively on the next day. Moreover, the children could not concentrate on studying at home and it is difficult for them to sleep.

In my opinion, in order to resolve this problem, the manager should be asked to rearrange the working time. For example, the suitable time may be between 8am and 5pm every day, instead of up to 12pm as during the past days. In addition, in case there is any plan to work overtime, they should have a notice to us so that we can arrange proper time for our daily activities.

I hope this letter will reach you soon and I will receive your reply as soon as possible.

Yours respectfully,

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56994818653 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48088615255 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616580310881 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6761042204 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196942890196 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707036356393 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542402902095 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897530817154 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060007949619 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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