Write an email to the restaurant s manager in about 150 200 words Your email should do the following things State what problems you had with the food you ordered Complain about the service Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to you

Essay topics:

Write an email to the restaurant's manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

State what problems you had with the food you ordered.

Complain about the service.

Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

Respected Sir,

I have been a regular visitor at your restaurant and i had arranged an important family dinner at your place yesterday. The arrangement was for 20 people and 4 children. I am writing this email to express my dissatisfaction with the experience we had. when I reached with my family at the restaurant, to my utter disappointment, the table was not reserved for 20 to 25 people and some of my guests had to wait for tables to be free. Furthermore, I had ordered 7 dishes with your famous fish item, but it was very disappointing last night as the taste was bland and fish was not fully cooked. The drinks arrived late when almost everyone finished their main courses. The waiters were not paying attention and we had to call them again and again for certain requirements.

I inquired about you twice but unfortunately, you were not present at that time. I wanted to register my complaint to you right away so you may take some corrective measures. However, I want you to please consider this email as a formal complaint against the services I received and I want you to compensate me either fully or partially for the bill that I had paid.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours Truly,

Sam

Votes
Average: 9.7 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Sir, I have been a regular visitor at your re...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... regular visitor at your restaurant and i had arranged an important family dinner...
^
Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...atisfaction with the experience we had. when I reached with my family at the restaur...
^^^^
Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to your prompt response. Yours Truly, Sam
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, look, may, so, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66820276498 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81138473609 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4776043467 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22236063131 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768821625232 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685023616242 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13313861632 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982373004426 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.