Write a letter to apply for a part-time job in a new international company, you have heard about the position from someone in your neighbourhood
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the part-time job of a sales manager in your company Colt India. My neighbour has been working in your company for the last 1year and through him, I came to know that you need a sales manager for the evening hours.
I am a post-graduate student at Amrita University. I am allowed 20 hours of part-time work per week during my studies. Your company is at a walking distance from my university and therefore it would be very convenient for me. Attached is my resume. I would be happy to provide references from members of the community.
The job, as described, sounds very much like what I am looking for. I know I would be able to provide the best service, as this not only helps me to uplift my career interest but also provide an opportunity to understand the work culture. I will be available to come for an interview at your convenience and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Rahul
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50289017341 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64081519768 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1689207859 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8181818182 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236713117762 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901984444119 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873593167649 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169402887806 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847700639395 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.