Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include:
- what you bought
- what the problem is
- why you want a refund
Dear Sir/Madam,
Please accept this letter as request for refund of a recent online purchase that I have made from your company. Allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would like this course of action to be realized.
To begin with, I surfed your website last week and selected deliberately a brand new laptop that would be a surprise present for my young brother’s birthday. However, it appears that he has just had the same laptop as a reward for his merit in annual company meeting. Besides that, I really have no need to use personally the item that I purchased from you. Thus, you can empathize with my situation.
Finally, I would like to return this laptop to you for a refund. From your terms and conditions, if the item is not activated and sent back by mail to your company within 60 days of the purchase day, my account will be probably credited for full price. For your information, I will enclose the transaction receipt along with the item.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Son
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, really, so, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72625698324 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58187607754 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3530962637 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267684617612 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103234344318 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579648638721 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165990476271 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217025466493 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.