You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
what was the item .
why it was important that you get it immediately.
what you suggest the company should do now
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to notify the delivery trouble of recent online purchase I have made from your company. Allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would like this course of action to be realized.
I selected and paid for a new tablet computer from your website last Monday to gift to a brother of mine for his birthday. According to your terms and conditions, the item would have been sent to my address next day. Unfortunately, it seems that I did not get the digital device on correct schedule as your commitment. Furthermore, my beloved sibling's celebrating party shall be held next Friday and he is very eager to unseal the astonished box that I would set up for him. Thus, I hope you can empathize this crucial situation.
Therefore, I would like to ask your team for scanning the delivery system to check the passage of my package. In case of erroneous matter on your website, I can expect to cancel the deal and make a new order instantly with prime service to get the purchase in three hours.
Your help greatly appreciated,
Haki
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61578947368 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59095486094 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2989275985 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102756222568 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396985477104 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426033776782 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048433168508 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391175697268 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.