Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that some people contend that history is significantly considered as an essential topic in classroom. Others, however, advocate that science and technology are more useful subjects in school. On my perspective, both opinions are equally important at some reasons.
On the one hand, it is obvious that historical lessons have allowed us to gain a better understanding of the past and can help to gain more insight into milestones of civilization. The periods of World War One and Two have been deliberately recorded in historical books to educate descendants how these disastrous and destructive events cause to mankind. Furthermore, profound learning of chronicle enables students to gain deep knowledge about not only ancient societies but also the industrial revolutions. For example, the explorer Christopher Columbus made his trips across Atlantic Ocean from Spain in late fifteenth century to discover “New World”. He was determined to find a direct water route from Europe to Asia, but he accidentally stumbled upon the Americas. His journeys marked the beginning of centuries of transatlantic conquest and colonization.
On the other hand, there is no question that the advent of modern science and technology has brought with a number of improvements to the way that society functions. Increases in scientific application help to satisfy many basic human needs and improve living standards. Therefore, the cutting-edge technology can now do the work of what have been carried out by humans, allowing greater efficiency and higher productivity output. Finding a cure for cancer and a clean form of energy are just two topical examples of science. The sources of renewable energy, such as solar and wind power, are beginning of assistance to ease the planet’s reliance on fossil fuels.
In conclusion, education in science has led to many advantages for students, but history subject alone also plays a vital role to contribute enormous knowledge. In my opinion, most students would benefit greater from a more well-rounded education, with emphasis on all disciplines, not only that of science and technology subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06678774532 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7553952646 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207798397702 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056885000455 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575559946519 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131656069382 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889491387281 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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