You would like to participate in a training course. Write a letter to your manager about the course and ask for permission. In your letter: Give details of the course; why is it useful for you? And how will it benefit your work?
Dear Mr. Ian,
I am writing to express my interest in an upcoming training course and would like to ask you for permission to take part. Please allow me to elaborate on.
To begin with, the training budget has recently been allocated to our department and allowed each employee to intentionally pursuing a proper short-term class to improve the practical experience. I am planning to attend the technical section of pressure depletion that will be arranged in Next Institute within one week. During the training, I will have a great opportunity to use the advanced application to build a model for our production field. Furthermore, I will gain more insight into the reservoirs’ system to evaluate seal capabilities upon completion of education.
I trust the lessons will help not only our team shorten the simulation time to generate an efficient production profile but other staff understand the process in manner of directional drilling. This, as I am sure you can see, is both beneficent and convenient for company. Thus, I am expecting you to grant a permission to start the paper work soon for air tickets and accommodation with administration employees at our side.
Your timely attention for this matter is greatly appreciated.
Haki
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1862745098 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09523017351 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710784313725 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3646701568 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206324373137 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727232343871 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669178128522 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133571642199 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049068688485 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.