Dear Z,
I Cucoo, one of the residents of the Hill Avenue Society is writing this on behalf of my Society to bring your attention towards the increase of disposal garbage and dirty roads in our street.
From past few months, the littering of garbage on roads has increased due to the insufficient number of trash bins. The lack of trash bins is resulting in overloading of disposables and has lead to the birth of some maggots and invitation to insects. Also, the foul smell in the street is causing air pollution which sadly has started affecting the health of many residents.
We all at our utmost are trying to cut down on our garbage however, the situation still persists. Thereby, I suggest a measure that more trash bins must be provided in the area in order to curb down the air and land pollution.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Cucoo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74509803922 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50317411384 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5319573736 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165095175074 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630919326724 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507637638797 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902372857482 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054474002091 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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