Dear James,
I am writing to request you my apology for damaging the book "The Wings of Fire" - by APJ Kalam, which I have borrowed day before yesterday. The damage happened due to my negligence in the book.
I have loved reading the book and it became one of my best books ever I read. I have completed reading 40 pages in the evening I have bought it from you and thought of continuing the next day. I somehow forgot to put back into the book rack and just left it on the reading table. Later when I went back in the evening of next to resume my reading, I found that some of the pages have been turned off and pen marks were made on other pages. I found to be known later that was done by my 2-year-old daughter while she grabbed the book and played with it.
I take the complete blame for the damage of the book and as a token of responsibility, I promise you that I will make an arrangement of new copy for you within two days or earlier. Please accept this letter as my apology.
Awaiting to hearing from you.
Regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and thought of continuing the next day. I somehow forgot to put back into the boo...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...next to resume my reading, I found that some of the pages have been turned off and pen mark...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.285 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31823713418 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7379935135 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18464620746 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729020670525 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686582267549 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143972081421 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481189541308 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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