Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
A few decades ago, there were hardly few families who left the rural areas in search of jobs under other country's governance. However, in today's world, the migrations from rural areas to cities has increased enormously and most of the migrants are youngsters. A variety of reasons causes the youngsters to attract towards cities but as far as I believe, migration might be good but, I foresee a lot of disadvantages over advantages. I will illustrate in the essay.
With the present environmental conditions, the incessant drought in some rural areas has made no space for the people to make living leading the people to leave the place. They migrate to cities in search of jobs to make their living. Another conspicuous reason is youngsters now tending to pursue higher studies and can be only found in the cities. Henceforth they leave their birthplace and make their way to cities. They usually found good education and high-income jobs and gradually hesitate to reenter rural areas. Some people return to the home place and try to improve their occupation with the achieved knowledge from studies. The probability of settling a person after he got into the city's culture and more money is negligible.
However, whatever the reason may be; I personally believe that the advantages of this migrations do not overweigh disadvantages. As a result of migration, the traditional culture of the rural or villages will be ravaged and in turn might get into the danger of extinction. Moreover, villages or rural places will be facing a scarcity of labor for example farmer and cultivation immensely drops down. This leads the country's development like India to a halt and demand for the food increases. In addition, if the population within the city increases, it increases the pollution and will be a hub for health hazards.
In conclusion, I would opine that migration will rule out advantages with its numerous disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07836990596 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84546958567 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579937304075 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1400559108 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2941176471 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252749742688 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691520367922 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523340126879 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125121218402 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055189008359 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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