Write a letter to invite a famous person to give a speech at a meeting in you youth club. In your letter, you should:
• introduce your club
• explain why you want to invite him/her
• tell him/her about the arrangement for the meeting
Dear Mr. Smith
I am writing this letter to invite you to deliver a speech on the Annual day of the Sunshine youth club on the behalf of all the members of the club.
Youth club named Sunshine not only aimed for the welfare of youngsters but also contributes in collecting donations for needy people for example, physically disabled, for care of old age, for the education of orphan children. Beside that we organise various social activities from time to time. On this Annual day, our club is raising funds for disabled people and on this auspicious occasion, you are the right personality to give a speech as you have denoted millions of dollars for the poor people. That is why, you will be an inspiration to the youth by encouraging them to donate more.
The meeting is organised on next Sunday that is 5th of June. Your speech will start at 1 p.m. and last for half an hour. We will make all the arrangements to pick you up and drop at your residential place.
Please manage to get some of your time for this event. I am looking forward to your response.
Yours Sincerely
John Thompson
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62626262626 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46127024921 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2790576824 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335432612045 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110304276617 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697731086275 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196272724769 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070082076925 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.