A friend has asked you to babysit on Saturday and wants to know how much you will charge per hour for this. Unfortunately, you already have a commitment this weekend and cannot help. However, you are free the following weekend.
Write a letter to your friend explain that you are not able to help this time, but could help later. Explain also what your for the service is.
Hi Flora
I am good and hope that you are also sailing on the same boat. I received your epistle and you want me to babysit your daughter this Saturday. But, sorry to say that I will not be available this weekend.
Last Thursday, I met one of my childhood friends, Mary. She is getting married and invited me on her wedding. I already promised her to attend her wedding on coming Saturday. I am leaving for Sydney this Friday for her marriage. It will not be possible for me to attend Lisa this time. You already know that I love spending time with Lisa and she also stays with me happily.
Next weekend, I am totally free. If, you do not have any urgent work and it is possible for you to postpone it till next weekend then I will definitely babysit your daughter. You asked me about charges so normally, my fee is ten dollars per hour but from you I will take just 5 dollars per hour. You should also write me about the food and activities which Lisa likes.
Hope that you understand my situation. I am waiting for your response and give my love to your daughter.
Yours truly
Malisa
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39024390244 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27038455862 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570731707317 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6146474527 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.25 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8125 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40772427774 0.216113520407 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122826071899 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908428183342 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251059100301 0.12726935374 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110285556379 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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