Dear Jason,
I hope you are doing well and enjoying summer. I have not seen you for a while and would like to ask you to join me for a massive music event.
The event is called the Stereosonic, which will be held in Melbourne on December 31st. There will be 55 artists playing trance and electronic songs. You are surely going to love this event as Armin Van Burren is also performing. I am sure that you do not want to miss his performance as he is coming to Melbourne after 3 years. He will be playing from midnight, so I think we should arrive there by 10 at night. This is because we have to avoid the peak traffic hour at 11 PM and skip the long queue for the show.
I am going to book the tickets next week. Please let me know if you are interested and can attend this concert.
Looking forward to see you there mate.
Take care,
Amid
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...attend this concert. Looking forward to see you there mate. Take care, Amid
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21212121212 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1690197013 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1655628897 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.9166666667 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257905974855 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800531967005 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575922168987 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152523897153 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412177816034 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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