Playing with Toys is an integral part of our life when we are growing up.There are different options like dolls, Cars and many more, every time our parents bought us a toy we would be thrilled, this toy would be our favorite for a month after which it would end up in the toy basket with the other toys. This essay would look into the merits and demerits of having a variety of toys.
Let us focus on the advantages. If we walk into a kids store what we see is a plethora of Toys like dolls, legos, trains, cars, jigsaw puzzel and many more. Having such a huge variety gives the kids an options of exploring their thoughts and thinking in different ways. Also it improves their learning ability like recognizing the colour and animals in a playful manner without giving any stress to the mind. in a recent experiments by teachers in a kinder-garden, it was found that the children were able to tell better story on any topic if they were allowed to play with their dolls etc before the story session. It was observes that they would do a role play with the dolls which in return help them to develop their story telling skills.
If there are advantages of having a gigantic collection of toys there are certain disadvantages also. Firstly, if the child plays only with their toys,they will lack social development, earlier when we had fewer options children would go out and play with their friends and they would interact with each other which would make them friendly and develop their interactive skill but with the child being constrained to these toys these skills are not developed. Another adverse effect of having a large number of toys are that they would not value the worth of the toy, when the kid is bored of playing with the particular toys and find nothing more interesting they would dump it in the old toy basket and would never be remembered.
To conclude, both mental and physical fitness is a vital element for the growth of our young generation. hence both the aspect should be balanced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...part of our life when we are growing up.There are different options like dolls, Cars ...
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...houghts and thinking in different ways. Also it improves their learning ability like...
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... to develop their story telling skills. If there are advantages of having a giga...
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...for the growth of our young generation. hence both the aspect should be balanced.
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...for the growth of our young generation. hence both the aspect should be balanced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60555555556 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33935070658 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536111111111 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.0062524673 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332566312823 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968792989467 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849743778133 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168309239489 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114778875824 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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