WRITE A LETTER TO LOCAL AUTHORITY BY REQUESTING ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR YOUR AGE GROUP IN YOUR AREA.
- MENTION ABOUT THE CURRENT SPORT FACILITIES AVAILABLE
• WHAT KIND OF ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES SHOULD BE INTRODUCED?
• HOW THE NEW SPORTS FACILITIES WOULD BE A HELP FOR THE PEOPLE IN YOUR AGE GROUP?
HELLO SIR,
I AM ANCHAL SAINI WORKING IN AN ARCHITECTURAL FIRM AND ONE OF THE CITIZEN OF SANTOKHGARH AND WRITING THIS LETTER TO REQUEST YOU TO PROVIDE SOME ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITY IN OUR AREA.
CURRENTLY , THERE ARE ONLY A CRICKET AND BASKET BALL GROUND WHERE STUDENTS OF BOY SCHOOL AND SOME OTHER BOYS OF TOWN USED TO PLAY THERE DAILY BUT THERE IS NOT ANY FACILITY FOR GIRLS . ALL GROUND FILLS WITH BOYS ALL THE TIME.
I JUST WANT TO ADD SOME FACILITIES FOR GIRLS ALSO LIKE TWO BADMINTON AND TWO TENNIS GROUND SPECIFICALLY DEDICATED FOR GIRLS SO THAT WE ALSO GET THE CHANCE TO PLAY , ENJOY AND TO KEEP OURSELF FIT.DUE TO THE LACK OF GROUND AND ALWAYS BE CROWDED WITH BOYS, GIRLS OF OUR TOWN FEEL UNCOMFORTABLE. ALTHOUGH I PERSONALLY KNOW SOME GIRLS OF OUR AREA WHO ARE REALLY GOOD IN SPORTS AND YOUR LITTLE HELP CAN MAKE THEIR CAREER BETTER.
I LOOK FOREWARD TO RECEIVING A PROMPT REPLY.
YOURS FAITHFULLY,
ANCHAL SAINI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...L SAINI WORKING IN AN ARCHITECTURAL FIRM AND ONE OF THE CITIZEN OF SANTOKHGARH A...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...NI WORKING IN AN ARCHITECTURAL FIRM AND ONE OF THE CITIZEN OF SANTOKHGARH AND WR...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... SPORTS FACILITY IN OUR AREA. CURRENTLY , THERE ARE ONLY A CRICKET AND BASKET BAL...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ER BOYS OF TOWN USED TO PLAY THERE DAILY BUT THERE IS NOT ANY FACILITY FOR GIRLS ...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... BUT THERE IS NOT ANY FACILITY FOR GIRLS . ALL GROUND FILLS WITH BOYS ALL THE TIME...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...S SO THAT WE ALSO GET THE CHANCE TO PLAY , ENJOY AND TO KEEP OURSELF FIT.DUE TO TH...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
....DUE TO THE LACK OF GROUND AND ALWAYS BE CROWDED WITH BOYS, GIRLS OF OUR TOWN FEE...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ER BETTER. I LOOK FOREWARD TO RECEIVING A PROMPT REPLY. YOURS FAITHFULLY, ANCH...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42978931881 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6230075374 44.8134815571 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216145200302 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854194086724 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777032318585 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113553665889 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950817070883 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.